T2 Written Language
We are learning to …
Write a recount about a time we did
something special with friends.
Criteria:
I know I have done this when I . . .
- write my ideas in order
- have capitals at the beginnings of
sentences and for proper names
- have full stops at the end of sentences
- record some beginning, middle and end
sounds in unknown words
- use some describing words
- write how I felt about it and why
- proofread my work and make some
corrections to words or punctuation.
Next steps: A few more details would have made your story a little bit clearer.
What game were you playing?
T2 Reading
We are learning to read without pointing and to self correct independently when what we read does not look or sound right.
We also have to make the reading sound like talking.
T1 Statistics
Next Steps:
Remember to label what each axis e.g. Number of children on the side and Subjects at the bottom and also colour down from the line.
T1 Football Coaching
We were very lucky to get some football coaching from Sport Canterbury for our Physical Education.
The girls learnt soccer from a female coach and the boys from a male coach.
We learnt to control the ball by playing games like Break the ice, Get in the hoop and Rob the nest.
Then we played a game of four a-side without a goalkeeper.
T1 Writing
We
are learning to...
·
write a personal recount about something
we have done or experienced
Criteria:
·
have
an opening statement that tells who, what and where
·
write the events in the order they
happened
·
have a conclusion or personal response
Kicking the ball
I was kicking the ball and Jayden too. Jayden kicked the ball. It went to the goalpost and I kicked the ball in the goalpost. We got a point. We got a game too and we kicked a goal. I kicked the ball in the goal post. We got a medal.
Teacher comment:
A good try Jun.
Next step.
Add some more detail to your work and tell how you felt about it.
2015 Learning plan
We
Are Learning To…
Fill in a Lotus sheet so that others can
learn a little about ourselves.
We had to draw people so that they were not
stick figures and our drawings had to be coloured carefully.
T1 2015 Art with Mr Shaskey
Term 4 Writing
WALT: I am learning to write a recount
about the Jubilee.
SUCCESS CRITERIA:
Write about the jubilee and how you were part of it.
TEACHER: I loved reading your story. This was a very funny part of the production Jun.
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