T1 Writing

We are learning to...

·      write a personal recount about something we have done or experienced

Criteria:

·      have an opening statement that tells who, what and where

·      write the events in the order they happened

·      have a conclusion or personal response

Kicking the ball

I was kicking the ball and Jayden too. Jayden kicked the ball. It went to the goalpost and I kicked the ball in the goalpost. We got a point. We got a game too and we kicked a goal. I kicked the ball in the goal post. We got a medal.

Teacher comment:

A good try Jun. 

Next step. 

Add some more detail to your work and tell how you felt about it.