We are learning to...
· write a personal recount about something we have done or experienced
· have an opening statement that tells who, what and where
· write the events in the order they happened
· have a conclusion or personal response
Kicking the ball
I was kicking the ball and Jayden too. Jayden kicked the ball. It went to the goalpost and I kicked the ball in the goalpost. We got a point. We got a game too and we kicked a goal. I kicked the ball in the goal post. We got a medal.
A good try Jun.
Add some more detail to your work and tell how you felt about it.